imageKandi
Jan 8, 2022

Dear Noure, I found your writing as being passionate and caring, but unsubstantiated and bewildering statements like: "...electromagnetic weapons, such as our cellphones, 5G, Wi-Fi, Bluetooth, TV, microwaves, etc." really make your writing less impactful and substantially devalue your other useful insights. You remind me of people who upon arrival of the steam engine thought that the "smoke-spewing iron beast will enslave them."

Also, the picture of the man you use for the illustration is faulty. He's just old, and we know for sure he is a human.

Also, your writing implies that there's only evil in the world, which is obviously not true. The more accurate way to describe the situation would be a competition between good and evil, or a careful balance between the two.

With all due respect, please think of the impression you're making on your readers while writing.

imageKandi
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